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for iCarly :iGobble Gibby

by David-J-Booshty

person Krulos
schedule June 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 1 Title Review: This is far more a title review (a review or comment about the title than the content of the story), but GOOD GRIEF; talk about overeating! Gibby's a rather large boy, so devouring him would lead to some serious health problems, to put it mildly! The title did make me laugh, though; as the concept of anyone devouring him is a perfect example of overeating, as well as a rather repulsive diet to put things simply! There's a biological reason why we humans are conditioned to avoid consuming other humans bodies- we aren't a canabalistic species, nor are we intended to be one!

This is one oddly titled story- well, that's the idea I got from the title, which is a quite bizarre concept, to put it plainly.

This title was fun, but totally bizarre.

Sincerely;

Krulos, an iCarly fan as well.

person Anonymous
schedule July 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
                                                                       Where do I start....                                                          This fanfiction is just amazing...                                                  It was an experience of a life time.                                     We laughed , we cried , we fell in love with this beautiful , wonderful , Gorgest , strawberry-scented , extra crispy , creamy , 34C breasted , spikey eyed story , indeed.                                            I've never seen a story that looking looks like that.                                    GIBBY VORE                                             You requested a furry , well , here I am.                                               I appreciate all the adjectives , my favourite character was Carly Raven Darkness Dementia Shae.                                         I'm glad you described in great detail what her outfit looking looked like.                                    For a second , I thought it was a snake too ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! The plot is gripping , it had me on the end of my obvious park wooden bench trimmed with metal by displaying indeed a characture of a stick drawn atypical squareish bus's glassy metal made frontside , on which I am seated casually.                                           Perfect 10/10 thank you :^)  <3
person josh
schedule March 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM
So great story lol. It's over? I will love to read more of it.
schedule January 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM
It's ok but the sentence structure is weird and you put too much description that breaks the fic's flow and immersion.
person Xemtlenc
schedule September 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really like, you have a lot of dirty imagination and you do not hesitate to use it.
even if sometimes I have trouble understanding is all connected in paragraphs.
person Xemtlenc
schedule September 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
You never thought to publish this story on "fanfiction.net" or "archive of our own"?
person pettrum
schedule April 12, 2014 at 12:00 AM
What's with the way over excessive quotation marks?

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