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I love this, so much. So clever and cute.

I am in love with the plot and the way you are keeping the characters just different from the show. I am looking forward to reading the rest!

oh how lovely - you've updated!! I went back to this story just for a reread and was wonderfully surprised to see you added a couple of new chapters. I suppose the only real criticism i have is that the chapters are so short! then again, i do like the way scenes have been being divided, so who am i to criticize really? I see that you've brought discord/conflict back into Dean and Sam's relationship, well done. i feel you have woven reluctance and longing together wonderfully. i hope you are enjoying writing the story as much as I am reading it. I look forward to more. Thank you for writing and posting.

I have really enjoyed this story. I feel it is well written, has unique storyline - post apocalyptic old west where women are barren and men have begun breeding. The arranged marriage and owned breeders is enough to give conflict and press a few non-con buttons lightly without any actual non-con. And of course the growing romance, slow but steady so it's believable. I love how the show characters have been matched with new setting; I find them fitting,except maybe for Ellen who I think would be more of a hard woman or spitfire. If you wanted to expandbyourvwriting you could add in more descriptions of people, places, inner thoughts, moods etc. but it's still goodvandvenjoyable to read as is. I hope you have not abandoned this as I have grown fond of the characters and would like to see the rest to the end, not mention maybe a little more Dean and Sam up close and personal! Thanks for writing and posting.

I just read this chapter and thought it was great. I can't wait to read more. Thank you.

I just read the last 2 chapters and thought they were really good. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

This chapter was very good. I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you.

I just read these 2 chapters and thought they were great. Can't wait for more. Thank you.