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This is really great. It's cool to see folks write femslash for Charmed, and the Source/Queen of the Underworld plot is an interesting and sexy twist. I always wonder with stories what it'd be like if the evil side won.
The Leo's-body sex, plus the voyeurism with Piper - nice additions.
Do you think you're ever going to continue this? I'm a big Charmed/Halliwell femslash fan and would definitely be into seeing it. I realize it's been a while, but you probably have other stories offsite in progress, so yeah. Feel free to hit me up if you ever want to discuss ideas for future chapters, I suppose?
Peace.

Chapter 4: I'm liking the gradually increasing kink factor.

Good fic.
I like the idea of this fic with a evil Phoebe.
I like her plan for keep her power on the demons.
I like also the fact her sisters means of lot for her.
I look really forward to read the next chapter for see Piper's reaction and I hope that the next sex scene between the sisters will be with Phoebe with her real form.

Chapter 2: Nice bit of plot.
Chapter 3: Enjoyed the sibling sex stuff. Fun idea to make Phoebe take Leo's shape for her first time with her sister. Paige listening in was a good way to include her as well.

Heh. Well, at least Phoebe treated Cole to a good fucking before she screwed him. :P
Good start. It's nice to read some entertaining, well-written Charmed smut again.

Quote:Perhaps in some universe, good would have one. This is not that story.
I take it you mean "won" instead of "one"?