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October 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM
The grammar is neither good nor consistent and neither is the spelling.
The storyline is what drew me to the review yet it’s still lacking any imagination.
The character Mavi (such a boring character I can’t remember her name) is forgettable and dull and her interactions with the Boys are also dull.
Not written well.
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February 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE update and get them together!!!!
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February 21, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The potential is most definitely there, this has the beginnings of a good story. My only suggestion is doing some more proof-reading (spell checking and word-revision). You're on to something though!