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for Beneath a Heart of Darkness

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person Vidalhbea
schedule December 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Poor Tom,just when he seems to getting better,he has s setback . But it's good to see that he's determined to get over his trauma. I'm also glad to see Dennis wants to be there for him . I hope the pi taus and Holland don't see it coming when they get it . At least I hope they do. Glad  to see Hollands plan to turn Tom and Dennis against each other didn't work.  Those two have a true love . 

person Vidalhbea
schedule November 22, 2016 at 12:00 AM

My . My . Booker showed a few facets to his personality,and I must say it makes me root for him more . He also showed that he could be the better person and decided to go  apologize to Tom . To me it proves that Booker really does love Handsome... I mean Hanson . But he sure got a surprise  .  Tom wasn't home then came back almost naked with a equally almost naked Jorge .  Yikes!! I thought for sure Dennis was  gonna kill the poor guy .  Again I hope Jorge finds his own Booker .  I loved the way you show cased  the many facets of his personality , it was fascinating. Thumbs up!!  

person vidalhbea
schedule November 12, 2016 at 12:00 AM

You outdid yourself with this chapter. This was awesome!  I thought for sure Jorge was going to rape Tom . Shocked but glad he didn't.That Holland !  He and the pi tau need to be brought down,(hope I spelled  tau right)  And poor Dennis  ,not realizing the  trouble Tom is in . When that guy approached him I thought Dennis was going to leave with him .  I'm glad that didn't happen. He should find Tom and show him his romantic side ,I'm sure Hanson wouldn't mind . I'm also glad Jorge made the right choice , he's my hero! Sorry for rambling on but it was a great chapter. 

Huggles!

person vidalhbea
schedule October 31, 2016 at 12:00 AM

 Trouble in paradise ! Dennis and Tom sure have short tempers .  I feel bad for both of them . While Tom has his reasons ,Dennis has his reasons too .  But I guess they are too stubborn to be reasonable. Of course  with them being hotheaded . Poor Dennis hope he gets his Tom ,and I hope Tom gets his Dennis. I must say ,I'm surprised at Dougs reaction . He seemed levelheaded . He showed that he just wants Tim to be happy . A true friend . I was surprised by Jorge's visit ,but it has me question his motives for taking to Tom . I'm wondering what he wants with Tom . Great chapter and really looking forward to the next. 

Huggles!

person vidalhbea
schedule October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM

As usual another chapter that rocks ! I'm just amazed by the Dennis and Tom  interaction.  It just seems  so real .  I love it !  The way.  Dennis  treated Tom ,like someone he cherished . It just melted me and made me wish for my Dennis.  The ending to the chapter was  unexpected .   Poor Doug  ! He seemed to feel bed after accidentally punching Tom . Of course Dennis didn't help.  So two thumbs up !

 Huggles much !! :)

schedule August 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM

This just gets better and better. Booker actually bargained Tom's body? Wow! I really wasn't expecting that!

person Anon
schedule June 9, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow! The last two chapters were intense! Just when I thought Tom and Dennis would start their relationship, you throw a spanner in the works! Haha! I love a twist. Well done, you're keeping me guessing.
person Vidalhbea
schedule June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I must say this is getting good! I say bring Ingram down the hard way . Anyway great chapter.
person Vidalhbea
schedule June 7, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Oh my ,such a steamy chapter! What's going on with my favorite officer ? Dennis seems confused about his situation . Not that he can be blamed because of what Holland is putting him through . Please don't let him lose himself to Holland , he's too good for that . As for him falling for Jorge , YIKES ! Then all he's doing for Tom will be for nothing . We'll not true. Dennis could get Jorge out and help him . I just love these twists you put . I know the next chapter will be just as awesome . Huggles !
person Vidalhbea
schedule April 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is just...wow . Just when I think when you can't get better,you get better . The characters come to life. I'm also noticing Jorge. He seems to speak volumes,even when he's silent . I hope Dennis can help him . I think I'm growing attached to Jorge . As for Holland ,well you know . No mercy for him . Dennis sure haves his hands full. Anywho great chapter.

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