rate_review Reviews

Can only be broken by death

oh man that was such a goodline

Kudos

I like this story.

Please continue.

Hi there. Just thought I'd return the kindness since you were so nice to review my story. So, this is a really interesting take. I really like Dean as a genie. What a great twist. You are a very good writer. I enjoyed this. I hope you'll continue the story. Nice LotR mention too. Also, there's nothing wrong with using the word cock. Like you said in your bio, penis sounds silly, and I have the same conflict with my dad's name too. Keep up the writing. You've got talent.