rate_review Reviews

Bahahaha! That was brilliant! Thank you, thank you, thank you, I do so love my boys :D

Sweet story, but you could really benefit by using a Beta or at least using a grammar checking program. There are so many errors throughout the text, it detracts from your story. But I did enjoy the idea of an author bringing Tom and Dennis to life. Very unique. I hope next time you will take the time to proof read your work before posting because I think you have a lot of promise as a writer.