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Good start , this looks promising. Don't take the person above to heart . This is adult fanfiction, this is the place for these type of stories . Aswell as Chuck/Sarah etc keep up the good work

A great start to what I hope is a great story. Hopefully you won't get any "bad" reviews after this chapter as all those who hate the premise of your story will have stopped reading. LMAO! Please continue! Really looking forward to Chapter 2!

I DEMAND more realism from my pornography! Derp, derp! Seriously, though, looking forward to more. Weeks or months of it? Sucking and fucking and more? Sarah getting a little turned on thinking about becoming a sex slave? Dropping a hint about her being an anal virgin (not for long, I imagine)? Thinks Pierre and Billings are attractive? I'm in! Let's see more! Maybe Casey will eventually get a long-awaited turn with her (as a paying customer?) Poor Brad (and us), just a hand job? Update soon. Hopefully Pierre insists on some more demonstrations...

I can already see where this story is going and it's not to me I'm afraid Caseys a creep Sarah's a slut who claims to love chuck but her actions prove otherwise No thanks I'd rather watch paint dry then read this crap

OH NO! We lost "Steve" too? How will we go on? I'm going to sob in the corner until he comes back...

Yeah yeah boyyyy!

Really like this so far.looking forward to the next chapter. Now if merlin would update his story everything will be grand.

Anyone who wonders why this forum is dead, I'd ask them to read the reviews to this story. Who needs that crap from trolls? Please don't be discouraged. This is a great concept. I'm really looking forward to seeing this progress and what he demands of Sarah next.

That was a great start. Looking forward to see what happens next.