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June 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was really good. I like how managed to keep them pretty much in character. You made it fit so well into the actual show that it seemed like the next episode. The only problem i had with it is that you made Tyr cry. Even though he has changed a lot i dont think he would allow himself to cry espically in front of Beka. But i really liked your story keep on writing.
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December 27, 2002 at 12:00 AM
more please