schedule
June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
+Spelling.
+Grammer.
+Decent descriptions.
-Abby is way too OOC.
-Shitty storyline.
-Even shittier ending.
-Tony Marlowe=makes me want to hurl.
-Abby would NOT wink at McCoy 'naughtily'.
Rating: 4/10
It was a dumb fanfic. The only positive thing that I can say is.. you spelled things correctly.
+Grammer.
+Decent descriptions.
-Abby is way too OOC.
-Shitty storyline.
-Even shittier ending.
-Tony Marlowe=makes me want to hurl.
-Abby would NOT wink at McCoy 'naughtily'.
Rating: 4/10
It was a dumb fanfic. The only positive thing that I can say is.. you spelled things correctly.
schedule
July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
All I can say is that reading this story really, REALLY made me want to hit you.
Hard.
Hard.
schedule
February 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story but I think it would make a little more sense if it were longer.
schedule
January 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You ended it too soon, will abby & marlowe go on to have kids? Will Abby continue to work; get her practice off the ground? You just can't end it this way write more You've got me hooked.
schedule
December 7, 2003 at 12:00 AM
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schedule
July 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That's all you could think of writing at the moment? Next time save yourself and evreybody else the trouble by not posting it until you have completed a few more chapters!