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for I Can't Fight This Feeling, Part 1

by sagelondon

schedule March 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well, first off, let me say that I really do love this, and it's probably one of my new favorites. I love the soft slow Susan/Marcus fics. They are just so perfect that it astounds me. However, the numerous gramatical, textual, and occasional spelling errors did drive me a little wonky and did make a few sentences harder to understand. Aside from that, count this as a positive review however. The way you wrote the characters was VERY fitting. Much more so than your other Susan/Marcus fic (which I did read through, and if I didn't review it I'm sorry, I did like it a fair bit though!).

I realize you wrote this quite a while ago, but I am still going to wish that you would write more!

-M
person MarzBar
schedule June 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just found this today and enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.
person Jeff
schedule February 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WAS this a dream? A trip through time? Both? Neither? Something else entirely?

Whatever it was, it was enjoyable. Moreover, it was true to the characters...I swear I was hearing
Claudia and Jason in every word of dialogue. Very well done.
person Foxfur
schedule October 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Perfect use of this song!!!!

Couldn't be better.

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