The Deal | By : MissMikaele Category: M through R > Once Upon A Time Views: 7649 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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~~ Okay so I recently started watching Once Upon a Time and even though im only like seven episodes in I couldnt help my self I HAD to write a story about Rumpelstiltskin but like I said im only like seven episodes in so its not a very detailed story just yet because I dont know everything about his character yet... So yea :) please read it and tell me if I should keep going ~~
She walked through the forest with purpose. She needed to help her father, he was all she had in this world, and he was gravely ill. But she was so nervous, she had heard whispers of what kind of man Rumpelstiltskin was, but she didn't have a very clear picture because everyone in town thought she was a witch and refused to talk to her, even the doctor, so the only option she had left was to make a deal with the dark one. After half an hour of walking she came upon the dock she had heard Red talking about and breathed a shaky breath and looked around to find him, but he was no where in sight, and just as she was about to give up and sulk home a voice with a pleasant accent sounded behind her.
"Why hello dearie." She turned to him slightly afraid. He wasn't a large man, but not truly small either, his skin seemed to be a mixture between gold and a green color, and he had sharp looking teeth, she had heard he was an ugly man but she didn't think so, scary yes but he wasn't the ugliest man she ever saw, in fact there was something alluring about him. How would he respond to the deal she was going to make him, would he laugh, would he be angry, or perhaps he would be amused? If she didn't have so much at stake she would have ran away then but instead she smiled lightly at him trying to hide how afraid she was.
"Hello. Im sure you can guess why I'm here, id like very much to make a deal with you." His eyes lit up with unmasked excitement and he smiled even wider.
"Let me guess is it riches you desire? Or would you like to go to a ball all dressed up in a pretty little gown so you can mingle with the royals?" she shook her her head to both of the things he said. "Then pray tell dear, what is it you want?" He asked interested.
She sighed before talking excepting that it was to late to turn around.
"I've come because my father is gravely ill, but because I'm suspected of witchcraft the doctor will not help him, he sees it as penance I suppose, but he is all I have left if he dies I have no one, I do not have much to give, I can offer no children to you because no one takes interest in me in that way, I can't promise you a favor because I have no sway with anyone, I can't give you gold. All I have to give you that is truly mine is my innocence. I offer you three days and three nights in exchange for healing my father... He is all I have... Please? I know you usually prefer something else as trade, but this is all I have to give, and I promise I wont displease you, iv never been with a man but I hear the village girls talk, and I have an idea of what to do... Please, please Rumpelstiltskin."
He stared at her for a moment. No one had ever offered him sex as trade before, most wanted to make a deal as quickly as possible and go on their way, and the women he made deals with... Well, he could see the disgust in their eyes. He saw none in her hazel eyes, only sadness and desperation. His body was most willing to take her up on her offer, he hadn't been with a woman in so long, and she was very pleasing to the eye, her hooded cloak though loose didn't do much to hide what was underneath, she was rather buxom from the looks of things and possessed a rather round bottom, and she was so pretty, she could have been a fallen angel. His smile returned in full and he spoke to her in a husky voice.
"Hmmm are you sure your willing to give up your maidenhead? You could leave that town and find another to settle down in, and your pretty enough I have no doubt you could find some farmers boy to marry and have young ones with, are you sure you want to give that up to me instead of a child, you could always make more you know." he finished wanting to see what she would say, not truly wanting her to change what she was willing to trade just wanting to know why she would trade that. She just looked sadder and shook her head.
"I cannot leave. The only thing that makes the town angrier then me being there is me leaving, I have tried numerous times and I got tired of being punished, they say they wont let me go to a town were they know not of my evil ways, they make me stay in that village so they can keep an eye on me." her eyes were downcast and he saw tears fall down her face. He could always sense a desperate soul. He silently walked over to her and tilted her face up, she didn't flinch when he touched her, that somewhat endeared her to him. He smiled.
" I will accept your deal, and because I am such a jolly fellow I will give you tomorrow to prepare yourself and look after your father, pour this vial into his soup or a drink, make sure he finishes it and when you wake in the morning he will be healthy as a horse, and remember my sweet, I get you for three nights." and with that he walked off and disappeared into the mist of the forest.
She woke up in the morning to find her father out of bed and smiling and she couldn't help but smile right along side with him, the strange potion Rumpelstiltskin gave her had worked. Her father didn't suspect a thing, unlike the towns people her father was always willing to believe the best of her. She kissed him on the cheek around sun down and told him she was going into the forest and not to worry about her and that she would be back soon, its a good thing she often spent days in the forest avoiding the towns folk so her father wouldn't be suspicious as long as she came home with berries or some other good. She walked fast to the dock, and was surprised to see Rumpelstiltskin was waiting for her. She smiled shyly as said hello to him softly.
"Right on time, I trust your father is up and about?"
"Yes, thank you for asking... So are we going to do it here or do you have some other place in mind?" he grew amused at her boldness he smiled that wide smile and took her by the arm.
"I had some other place in mind, tis your first time after all I would assume you would want it elsewhere, elsewhere being out of these woods." All she did was nod as they started off towards the mist. She almost gasped when in the blink of an eye she was transported from the forest to a small cottage not unlike her own, it looked like someone hadn't lived there for a decade, but with a flick of his wrist the room changed, it looked infinitely more warm and lived in she turned around surprised.
"How did you do that?" she asked wide eyed. He just chuckled and said magic. Suddenly she remembered what she had told him, she told him she wouldn't displease him, and she knew that most men didn't like to talk, at least not to women, so she quieted herself and silently walked towards him and put her hand on his chest.
" I... I don't know much like I said yesterday, so you'll have to guide me through it, but I will do whatever you ask of me." He grabbed her chin and brought her face closer to his.
"Well normally one would start off with kissing, I trust you know how to do that?" he smirked lightly as she nodded.
"Would you like to kiss then?" she spoke softly as she pressed her mouth against his jaw bone. She left a trail of kisses down the length of his face and when she reached his lips she gave him a shy little kiss, which he then deepened, his hand ran through her loose curls and she couldn't help but sigh. She had never kissed anyone other then her father in the most daughterly of ways and she hadn't thought she would ever get her first kiss, but it was everything she had imagined it would be, warm and soft, yet demanding. She had to come up for air, and she noticed at some point during the locking of their lips her fingers entwined in his hair, she slowly pulled her hand away and ran it down his neck till she reached his shoulders, she squeezed slightly, steadying herself, after all she was about to spend three days being "with" him. She looked back into his eyes and smiled slightly, her face feeling slightly hot, and it only got hotter when he cupped his hand to her cheek then gently ran his thumb over her plump lips causing her whole body to become hot. His nostrils flared slightly and he spoke in a husky almost pained whisper.
"I want you, I want you now." He had truly wanted to do more before entering her but he couldn't wait, it had been so long. He began un fastening his breeches and she took the hint and began lifting up her dress for him, not all the way up because she had had the good sense to come with out underthings and was slightly nervous for him to see her naked, though she knew it was inevitable, as was him seeing her scars. But luckily for her he seemed to be content with just being able have access under her skirts. She felt something hard against her leg and she moaned, he gripped her hip in one hand and gripped himself with the other and gently prodded at her enterance. He was breathing a little heavy as he leaned closer to her and deeper in her, she felt a sharp pain and gasped, but he kept pushing in and out of her, she wanted desperately to laydown because her back hurt being pressed against the hard stone wall but she didn't complain. He sought out her mouth and stuck his tongue in, shortly after he began the kiss she noticed the pain wasn't as bad, it was still painful but there was a soft pleasure just behind it that was growing with his every thrust. She moaned deeply in his mouth and gripped at his back, and he moaned long and hard and laid his forehead against hers. When he slipped out of her she felt something run down her leg, a mixture of her blood and his milt.
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(^^milt is a synonym for jizz YAY learning^^)
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