Very nice! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Well done, thank you.

What a twist!!!!!

You do it very well, continue soon

I see Ellie with Sarah in the near future, well done!

Thank you!

Ellie needs to start fisting Sarah, teach her who the top bitch is

Chap7, sexy

Wow thanks for the fast updatez

I lol'd when ellie said how is this hurting her midorgasm 

Wow, things are getting interesting!

Thank you!

Nice. Glad you picked this one to continue. Seems to be easier to write. Very hot, so far

Really hot!

Thank you!

Well, well that is certainly an intriuingly beautiful and enthralling humdinger of a game changing chapter. As the game of cuckoldry and Ellie's affair with Jordan is completely turned on its head, upside down as the woodcombe marriage is now head for the rocks and eagerly look fowrad to seeing what happens next. In regards to how the woodcombe brothers get back at Ellie and rest of her family.   

Oh wow, Ellie has already wantonly and seductively crosses the line of no return in regards to their arrangement only being concerned with her getting pregnant. Progressing to a full blown affair and will be very interesting to see where it goes from here in regards to her marriage and becoming Jordan's baby mamba.

That last kinkily beautiful reveal of Devon and Sarah up to no good was intriguing compelling and hope it won't be long before we find out the truth behind it and Jordan makes Sarah into his lover and us cuckolding two for the price of one.

Super hot chapter. Looking forward to Jordan getting a piece of Sarah.

Chap2 was very sexy.  I like where this is going with Sarah also.