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By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - Lugi on August 23, 2006
    right about now, i clearly hate CHRIS, god i mean, ,lol, can't even think about it, Chris is just sick for what he just did.
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  • From on August 23, 2006
    lol, something we never knew that has happened, but still bit weird to see Wyatt in Leo's body humping Chris, lol,
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  • From on August 23, 2006
    wow, getting interesting there, i don't know whether to feel sorry for Wyatt or be happy for chris, damn these plot lines, to many of them.
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  • From on August 23, 2006
    bit confusing in the end, but made sense all the same.
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  • From on August 23, 2006
    lol, Wyatt kept a cool head while seeing Chris bang someone else. well looks like his cherub is moving on from him without Wyatt realisiing it.
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  • From on August 22, 2006
    i don't know how i missed this sequel.????
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 06, 2006
    Well, i haven't reviewed before because i didn't start reading until there were 21 chapters, 27 with the prolog. But now that i'm finished i thought i'd let you know that that was amazing! You have such talent, and for the most part i could picture everything beautifully. For a question a few chapters back, i am male, and it doesn't suprise me to know that more guys read this than girls (women). Anyway, i definitly can't wait until you next update. My regueards to Love and Kiss
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 24, 2005
    Good story hope there are more chapters
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  • From ANON - Twisted World on May 02, 2005
    Surely you're the only author still pulling in reviews this long afer you posted? Heh, maybe that should tell you something. I hope everything's okay and you abandoned this because your gremlins had a bad accident with a hacksaw and an oncoming dumptruck and not because there's something up. As long as nothing's up update soon!
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  • From ANON - Alicia on April 28, 2005
    hey,
    i just wanted to say that i lov your stories but where have you gone!!!!!!!! you havent added to any of you stories in forever and you are by far the best writer about of every body.:)
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  • From ANON - ennui deMorte on March 21, 2005
    Wonderful story!! I love how you are weaving everything through the actual episodes. I also really liked Wyatt's and Chris's souls connecting while Chris had that fever. And I just had to laugh at Chris bemoaning his instinctive reaction of throwing deadly energy balls if a demon choked him ~ lol! It almost sounded like it had happened to him before. Looking forward to seeing more!
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  • From ANON - Nitho on March 04, 2005
    Hey dude great story but come on i need the next chapter im dying for it. so hurry please. kay :)
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  • From ANON - Nitho on February 28, 2005
    Hey i read all of the story . I was so hooked on it that i went to sleep at 3 in the morning for three days until i finally finished it. So are u going to write more because the way you left it is driving me crazy. I want to know what happens. Is Chris going back or what. Well back to the point I loved the story and loved everything. It was spectacular. PLEASE KEEP ON WRITING. ILL BE WAITING
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  • From ANON - Eloise on February 11, 2005
    Wow! A new chapter with W/C sex! I had almost given up hope. Your Gremlins have let me down badly. They've gotten so lazy. You must be over feedinig them. Anyway, I'm very happy your writtin again. Please write more. And update "it's What's Inside that Counts" while you're at it. I'm getting as demanding as a gremlin.
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on February 08, 2005
    its been like wat, a 4182347019234781024879 years since your last update?? hahaha. its okay, as long as you dunt ever stop with this story! i understand ur busy. great chapter. poor wyatt at the end when he woke up all alone. and chris too... he has to deal with his aun phoebe down his back all the time now! ouch! loved the BD used in this chapter!! great sex scene! no one can write better than u! haha, love ya! update soon!
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