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From ANON - Jessie on February 08, 2005
that was an awesome update!!! and long anticipated! so that was all like a dream connection btwn the two? wow that's gottta suck... phoebe knows the secret!! hmm... wat new levels of trouble and drama could this cause? wyatt and chris doing the naughty! the best! do u mind if i give you a personal suggestion? i dunt know about everyone else, but i kinda miss the sex the two brothers had before, early on in this story... where chris is acutally the level headed one and has second thoughts about it while wyatt is the one to just plow through despite if his brother is a willing partner or not... iunno.. but ur fic is good no matter wat so just keep writing!!
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From ANON - janice on February 08, 2005
yay!! ur finally back for good!!! im so EXCITED to here more from you!!!!! u realli know how to torture people dunt ya?? ne ways, back to the story- loved the BD with chris.... always looks the best whens he helpless... but we all knew that! awww.... i feel bad for wyatt!! he misses his borhter/parter.... write soon!
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From ANON - Dominique on February 08, 2005
hey! ur back! thank heavenes, i thought i was going crzy for a while!! so glad u updated! ohhh!! some bdsm in this chapter! u know how kinky i like it! haha... but ne thing to do with tje two brothers is hot~ hmm... isn't chris supposed to be a little more resilient towards wyatt and his advances? i mean, seconds before, chris was taken by force but now he's willing? i dunno, only a suggestion... but ur fic is the best!! update ALL of them please!!
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From ANON - ashlee on February 08, 2005
wow! i can definatly say this chapter was unexpected.... yet very welcome!! i thought u had given up on all ur stories!!! dude, what happened?? haha... i understand how hard it is to keep up a story~ ahhh! chris and wyatt!! i just cant enough of them... but atleast chris was willing in this chapter. more soon i hope becasue u were gone so long!@
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From ANON - Anon on January 25, 2005
THis story is really REALLY good! You have to update soon...or else I'll give your gremlins mates so they can reproduce and bug you even more! lol
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From ANON - janice on December 23, 2004
woot!!! i read that like 10 times!!! thought it was pure genius!!!!! especially the ending! so swweeett!!!! and phoebe finding out the truth.. nice twist!
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From ANON - Dominique on December 23, 2004
yay! that was so hot! smut is the best!!! i hope u write more realli realli realli soon!!!!! love ya!!
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From ANON - xfaytx on December 23, 2004
that was soooooo great!!!! smut and a hot wyatt mixed in with a hot chris.... PERFECT!! cant wait for the next chaoter!!! im soooooooo excited so please hurry! last time i checked, this site was down and then i was busy x-mas shopping!! im so glad i got to read this chapter! it made my day! wonder how chris and phoebe are gonna act after she finds out the truth..
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From ANON - ~*holly*~ on December 23, 2004
sry it took so long for me to comment... but everytime i came to this site, i got as far as entering the charmed section before it shut down!! so annoyin.. but ne ways... yes smut! i LOVE smut!!! wyatt was so sweet in this... well kinda..... in a way... he loves chirs, thats all that matters! oh no! phoebe knows... this could get interestin
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From ANON - ashlee on December 23, 2004
omg!! this site was driving me absolutely insane!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was down for like a week?!? is this only happenin to me or is anyone else experiencin??? ne ways!! this was kinda confusin.. wyatt and chris meet in their dreams? awww!!! wyatt's thought at the end was sooo sweet! he loves chris!! how sweet!!!!
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From ANON - Eloise on December 19, 2004
Two gremlins make writer work more. Two gremlins good! And Chris & Wyatt are together again. Happiness! Here's hoping your gremlins keep you busy over the holidays. Do you dress your grelmins up as Santa and an elf?
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From ANON - Elosie on December 17, 2004
Yeah, another chapter! Okay, I'm not entirely sure how it fits in with the plot but I'm sure that will come. But where's Wyatt? We desperately need some C/W action. Now that you have two Gremlins I'ms sure you will write twice as fast!
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From ANON - alienangel19852003 on December 06, 2004
Aww. Reconcilation at last! Chris is a kitten. The cutest lil kitten i ever saw! Great 1st chapter!!!
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From ANON - Eloise on December 06, 2004
Yes! SoPoGa triumphs, the Gremlin is set free and the writing flows again all so I can get my Chris/Wyatt fix. Its all your fault anyway that I'm addicted to this pairing. Writing such lovely stories. All Hail the mighty Gremlin!
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From ANON - ~*holly*~ on December 06, 2004
the ending was sad... chris and wyatt need to be together!!! they just do! they should go through all this hardhsip and torture and serpation and absue... but in the end b togehter... its only right!!!
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