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By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - ashlee on November 29, 2004
    it didnt matter that this chapter had no smut because it was so great i forgot it had no smut!!! hahaha... i thought it was SOOOO cool had u put in scenes from the real episode.. it was SOOO cool how u made everything work!! his is the best fic EVER!!
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  • From ANON - Eloise on November 26, 2004
    Sorry! Meant to review the last chapter but I'm a print first and read later person. I have a hard time reading stories on computers and never really appreciate them it I do it that way. But I love this story! If you're taking suggestions - I'd really like for Chris and Wyatt to walk off into the sunset together ruling over the world! So its not politically correct. I want them together cause they're really hot and I want for the Charmed Ones and Leo in the past to find out about them and freak out about it. Just cause I'd like to torture them a little. Anyway, I hope your gremlin keeps you up writing cause you write the best C/W stories around.
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  • From ANON - Dominique on November 26, 2004
    haha.. everytime i see that name 'dominic', it makes me laugh... ne ways.. back to ur AWESOME story... u r the best writer of ALL times.. if u ever wrote a book, i will be the first person in line to go buy it.. u r just that GREAT! haha.. u should open up ur own site of ur writing!! that would be sooo cool!!! ne ways... i read both chapters 4 times.. thats says enough... write mroe pelase!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on November 26, 2004
    u updated so fast! yay! that makes me happy! i had to read all of the chapters again because it was just that fantastic! hahaha... wyatt looked great when he went total om on chris... but then the kitty died and that was realli sad.. also, when chris tells wyatt, "I hate you" that was sad too because they were such a cute couple together... i hope they can salvage their love in the end... wonder how wyatt is gonna react to chris returnin to the past...
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  • From ANON - Janice on November 26, 2004
    tell ur gremlins im so sorry! i was on thanksgiving break and didnt get to get my hands on a computer... loved it loved loved it loeved.. and did i mention, LUVED IT!!! haha... taking chris pressed up against a door.... wow... great! i thought that was amazing!! the happy chris was soooo cute and adorable too! i guess chris is back to the past again... great because then he can continue his work.. bad because no more chris.wyatt scenes!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on November 26, 2004
    i reviewed, and i thought u got it! but then i checked the reviews and it wasnt there!! ::sighs:: i guess ill write another one... the kitty died!!! awww.... great rough sex scene!! hot but sad at the same time... when chris told wyatt he hated him, that was also rather depressin.. but great drama! good to see chris happy in a long time.. cute sex... haha... i wasnt expectin chris to be released from the spell and then kill dominic... how did that happen??? GREAT! AWESOME! FANTASTIC! MORE!
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  • From ANON - jessie on November 26, 2004
    YES! u updated so fast!! can u update thsi fast more often?? haha... loved every single wrod! i also loved how wyatt took chris so roughly in the chapter before... i felt bad for chris, but at the same time loved it! the willing chris was cute too! the ending was great cause i wasnt expectin that. keep it up!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on November 26, 2004
    i did review ur other chapter!! i guess it didnt show... this site frusterates me to no end! ne ways.. ill review for both chapters now... ohh! rough sex! always hott! but wyatt killed chris's kitty!! awww!! how did chris get free from the spell?? loved it!!!
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  • From ANON - Jessie on November 17, 2004
    im sorry i havent been reviewin! my computers is jus soooo slow so it takes forever to submit in a review... but i do read all ur chapters!! and i love every single one of them! so ill review like every other chapter, deal? new ways, im a guy. like how ur doin the poll; im curious to see the results between boys and girls. back to ur story; the rough sex between chris and the demon made the story better! thats the stuff i wanna read about! chris is jus hot when he is struggling, dunt u agree? ne ways, another great scene between wy and chris! i reviewed so tell ur gremlins im expectin another chapter soon!
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  • From ANON - SpRiNgeR on November 17, 2004
    hey! im a guy, just to let u know. about ur story, i thought the drama in the beggining of the chapter was realli great and well written. this whole chapter was so well written! u added some of the real episode in, but not too much so it would be boring~ and it was cool how some of wyatt's more caring side came out in this chapter.... i like how u write wyatt with mixed personalitites. it would be boring if he was kind to chris all the time and made love to him with love or if wyatt was just cruel all the time and just went after chris with lust. you make wyatt see-saw from the one side to the other with each chapter so i thought it was cool how u switched to wyatts kind side this time because last time it was his lusty side. i would love more so update soon please!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx (female) on November 17, 2004
    i loved ur last chapter! i dunt have a problem with the rough sex! i thought it was great! great start to the chapter; opening with chris in the shower. that was so sad! atleast someone found him and healed him, but that person happened to be the person chris hated the most~ i like how u mixed the real episode with ur story! that is soo cool!!! now why couldn't the real episode go like this?? hahaha~ loved seeing the sensitive side of wyatt! but im so curious to see how chris is going to react? is he going to freak or go with it?? more more more!!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on November 17, 2004
    first off, i would like to say im a girl~ wat do u mean did we have a problem with the rough sex! thats wat made that chapter so great! it added drama and suspense and a greater twist to it! i thought u did a great job with it! and ill b sure to check out the other sites! great love scene! very passionate! and the beggining, the drama with chris was awesome. i give this chapter a 15 out of 10! haha! i reviewed and fed ur gremlins, now u write!!
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  • From ANON - Dominique on November 17, 2004
    no! i dont care that u used my name! i just thought i would point it out~ i have no problem with it! and about ur lsat chapter, i have no problem with rough sex.. that just added to the drama and i thought that was great! and that drama continued over onto this chapter! glad leo found chris and healed him. there so close to finding out who he is! nice twist to the episode chris-crossed! i love how u tied it together, but in ur own way! nice job! chris and wyatt; wat can i say, i love them together! so i thought their scene was great! im so excited for more! (p.s. im a boy)
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  • From ANON - Janice on November 17, 2004
    did i ever tell u i love ur gremlins! this site has been goin through its ups and downs, so i guess ill check out the other two sites for stories. i loved how u added a lil more leo into the mix; how he was the one to find chris and heal him and learn what happened to him. good choice! and the love scene btwn chris and wyatt was so sweet! in a twisted way... but still so sweet! but i dunt think chris reealli knew wat he was doin so that could b a problem when he wakes up. cant wait for more please.
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  • From ANON - ashlee on November 17, 2004
    that was a quick update! keep it up! cant wait to see chris's reaction to what happened! i like how u twisted the episode and made it your own! i personally like it ur way ten times more! hahaha~ keep up the good work!
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