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By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - Dominique on November 14, 2004
    ahh, the demon had the same name as me... sort of.. different spelling... ne ways; stupid stupid stupid site! no offense to the owner, but it got me so frusterated! i read ur update a few days ago, and then i reviewed. i looked to see if my review got posted, and it wasnt there! i tried again and again and again but it still wouldnt work! so here i am a few days later tryin again and hopefully it will work cause i realli wanna encourage to write more! but im sure ur gremlins do that for u! seein from other reviewers, others have been havin the same problem... ne ways, awesome awesome, great, fantastic, excellent, another word for great, chapter!!! i cant remember what i wrote on the other revews that didnt get posted, but all i have to say is, this chapter was great!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on November 14, 2004
    ::BIG HUG TO UR GREMLINS:: i wass oo happy to see that u had updated! well, i saw it a couple of days ago, but i heard this site was going through some turbulances, and wouldnt let me read it till now, stupid site!!(acutally i love this site!) i liked how u added phoebe catchin on to chris's secrets and maybe findin out his identity.... and i the premonitions too! they were great, added a bit more drama(always welcome!) and chris and the demon was a nice add... seems like chris gets treated like crap everywhere!! god that had to hurt! but what do u expect, it was demon; the only sex they know is probably rough or rape! hmm... wat kinda of future problems could dominic cause... wel, cant wait for more! as always, love u!!
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  • From ANON - SpRiNgEr on November 14, 2004
    this is soooo frusteratin!! i left like 3 reviews already and they havnt shown up!! and they were long too!! maybe therese sumtin wrong with the site; this stie is known for havin its occasional problems. hopefully this one will show; i jus wanted to let u know how much i enjoyed this chapter! and aya, phoebe is figurin out the puzzle! aww, chris was desperate enough to go through all that pain to forget about wyatt! i hope u get this message!!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on November 14, 2004
    ah! one of my friends told me that u had updated this story so i rushed to a computer to read it and it was great!!! i so needed this chapter! ahh, poor chris! i know i say this like everytime, but poor chris!! ouch! atleast it got his mind of wyatt for now~ but im sure wyatt will find a way to get back at chris! he has to b gettin lonely in the future! cant wait for the next installment! give one of ur gremlins a kiss from me
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  • From ANON - janice on November 14, 2004
    did i ever tell u that i LOVE ur gremlins!!! i cant blieve u fianlly updated this story! and u actually put smut in this chapter too!! yes!!! chris and that demon together was so hot! i was lovin every word! i hope u decide to update this fic soon!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on November 14, 2004
    omg!! this site was drivin me crazy! i see the story, i click it, and then nuttin shows up!! was it jus my stupid computer or was other ppl experiencin this difficulty? ne ways, excellent chapter!! im so glad u put some smut and kink in it, and chris was jus so cute in this chapter!! loved it!
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  • From ANON - SpRiNgEr on November 05, 2004
    i never knew halloween could be this great! nice holiday chapter! glad u tied that in to the story! and i liked how u put it in a dream~ nice kniky scene too! halloween my new official favorite holiday, becuase of that chapter! perfect costume choice for both of them too!
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  • From ANON - jessie on November 05, 2004
    excellent job! i thought this chapter was so great! vute yet dirty~ hahaha. loved it! perfect costume choice! i could picture it in my head~ lovin it so write more!
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  • From ANON - Dominiuqe on November 05, 2004
    this chapter was so unexpected~! but it was so great! chris dressed up like an angel was the best! and wyatt's thoughts at the end of the chapter was pretty cute and funny too! update soon please~
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  • From ANON - Janice on November 05, 2004
    the endin made me laugh so much! it was so cute wat wyatt said! ne ways; chris tickling wyatt!!! that was great! and i also loved how ugave chris an angel costume! i could picture it in my head~ this chapter was so cute and playful! i thought that was pretty nice... ne ways, cant wait to read more more more more more!!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on November 05, 2004
    u updated this story! yay! this chapter was a nice break from all the drama~ awww... its cute how wyatt and chris got all dressed up for halloween and passed out candy~ the smut was excellent too!! im so ready for more!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on November 03, 2004
    update soon please!! ur drivin me up the wall with this waitin!!
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  • From ANON - jessie on October 22, 2004
    hey! wow, it feels like forever since the aslt time u updated! probably because i was so anxious to read this chapter; hahaha.. i thought this was so great! wyatt playin with a chained up chris! yay!! the shackles, chain.leash, collar, rough play, torture.. the list just goes on and on.... and i was soooo totally lovin it! now that chris ran away, again, maybe wyatt will go get him and mayb punish him again? bdsm, tort, humil, n/c... wow, now theres sumtin to think about! i hope u write more because anything u write is 10 times better than wat i can think of in my head!!! hehe.. also, please write more on puppet!! that fic is so awesome too!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on October 22, 2004
    wow! that was perfect!! im serious, there was absoltuely noo flaws!!! perfection!! everything i could ask for is right there! i had to read it like 20 times before i was satisified because i just luved it so much! hehe.. whew, chris chained up like and waitin for wyatt to fuck him!! i thought i was gonna die!! that was sooo great!!! collar and allOVEDOVED it!!! i hope u write mof thf that in future chapters because i couldnt get enough of chained up chris! ohh! wyatt is gonna b so amd that his cherub rna off!!! more punishment?? hmm,.... more please!!
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  • From ANON - Dominique on October 22, 2004
    i was soo happy when i checked and saw that u had update this story! i've been sooo anxious to read the next chapter for thsi story! and when i rit, it, i was sooo not dissapointed! it was 1000 times better than i imagined!! and trust, i let my imagination run wild! thanks for such a great chapter! im hopin ur gonna keep up with the incredible writin! cant wait for more! please update ur other story too because i love that one too! thank you so much!
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