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By : GrumpyWriter

From ANON - Janice on October 22, 2004
woot woot!!! u updated! thank the lord!! i thought i was gonna go nuts!! but the wait was sooooo wroth it, because that chapter just blew my mind!! chris just looked soo incredibly hot!!! like mouth waterin, i tink im gonna go crazy hot!! i hope u write more chapters like that! chris tied to the bed like that, waitin to b fucked! wow!!! amsazin!!! lovin it! haha, please update soon and also update puppet, becuase im waitin to read that too! thank yoU!
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From ANON - kammy on October 22, 2004
that was incredible!! my favorite so far!!! i hung on to every single word!! i was readin it slow so i could savour each wrod, then i read it again! i thought it was sooo great! i LUV ur writin! u r the absolute best!! im glad u finally udpated this story! kink, incest, bdsm... that chapter rocked! im lookin forward to more!! thank you!!
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From ANON - ~*holly*~ on October 22, 2004
first off, let me just say "Welcome back!!!!" u've been gone forever!! but if u were off writin that awesome chaoter, i understand completely! that chaoter jsut blew me away! it was soo totally awesome! chris, bondage, dangerous wyatt... unbeatable combination!! the absolute best!! ur interenet is down?!?! oh no!! atleast it gives u more time to write, right? i hope u write more soon, and update ur rewrite of puppet too!!! i love that one too!
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From ANON - SpRiNgEr on October 22, 2004
brilliant!! that was my favorite chapter so far!!! chris chained up like that, that was hot!! i loved it so much!! im glad u came back! i hope all ur chapters are gonna be that long, because i enjoyed it so much! can u write more chapters like that? with kink and wyatt dominatin chris? wel, once wyatt finds chris, he prob wont b to happy...h!! h!! im so pumped for more!!! i think im gonna go back and read it again because i thought it was that great! write more please!
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From ANON - ashlee on October 22, 2004
omg omg omg!!! u updated this story!!!! YESSS!!! that chaper was just wat i needed!!! can i just tell u how much i missed u? hahaha.. i cant say it enough, i LOVED that chapter, i LOVED IT I LOVED I LOVED IT!! chris looked as hott as ever!!! ahhhh!! i read the chapter like 5 times!!! thats how good it was!!! more more more please!
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From ANON - ashlee on October 12, 2004
that was soooo great! loved it loved it loved it! hehe.. u left a great endin to the chapter to open up the next chapter with tons and tons of naughtiness!! haha... playtime!! yay!! wat kind of things is wyatt gonna do to vulnerable chrissy?? hmm... cant wait to read more!
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From ANON - Janice on October 12, 2004
hey! that was so great! why havent u posted more yet? been bz? well ur devoted fans are waitin! hahaha.. LOVED the last chapter to death! i thought it was so great! poor chris... caught under wyatt yet again.. good for the readers because we can read lots of kinkiness!! haa.. lookin forward to ur post!
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From ANON - SpRiNgEr on October 12, 2004
wow! that was... wow... haha especilly loved the endin!! but the only problem is that u left us with a tease! now its drvin me up the wall!! im sooo excited for the next chapter! i sense lotz of kink and smut!!! cant wait!
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From ANON - bayb on October 12, 2004
its been like 2 weeks and yet, still no update! come back and write some more please! the last chapter was soo great! it left me cravin for mroe!
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From ANON - xfaytx on October 12, 2004
why aren't u updatin?! u left us withn a cliff hanger and then u dunt update?! ur killin me with anticipation! update soon please!
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From ANON - Eloise on September 29, 2004
Oh, isn't there some way you could bring Adult Evil Wyatt to to the past in his own hot body to make wild monkey love to Chris and freak out the P3? It would be such fun. More please!
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From ANON - ashlee on September 22, 2004
watz goin on?!?!?! i've been waitin for ever for u to update this story!!! i've checked like everyday!!! and still no update?! please hurry bak and write some more!! we're all waitin!!
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From ANON - Eloise on September 22, 2004
Grumpy_Writer! Please write more. I want to see what happens when Chris goes into the past. You MUST have a scene where the girls find out about Chris & Wyatt. Please! To satisify my evil side.
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From ANON - dominique on September 02, 2004
another great chapter!~ i cant wait for the time traveling bit.. i wanan see how chris interacts with his mom and his aunts.. should b interestin.. and see how wyatt reacts when he finds out wat chris did.. oo!! the smut was soo good in cha chapter! i loved it! u finally added the n/c and bdsm stuff in.. i hope it is not just a one time thing and u add it into future chapters!!
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From ANON - Damon on September 02, 2004
u finally updated! yess! and this chapter was excellent.. loved the last scene with wyatt and chirs in bed~ that was the best! i hope u write more like that.. haha.. very errotic and kinky~ so chris will b meetin the charmed ones soon? cant wait to see wat happens~
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