Reviews for Alternate reality the bad seedBy : Irishdrgon |
I lol'd when ellie said how is this hurting her midorgasm
Wow, things are getting interesting!
Thank you!
Nice. Glad you picked this one to continue. Seems to be easier to write. Very hot, so far
Really hot!
Thank you!
Well, well that is certainly an intriuingly beautiful and enthralling humdinger of a game changing chapter. As the game of cuckoldry and Ellie's affair with Jordan is completely turned on its head, upside down as the woodcombe marriage is now head for the rocks and eagerly look fowrad to seeing what happens next. In regards to how the woodcombe brothers get back at Ellie and rest of her family.
Oh wow, Ellie has already wantonly and seductively crosses the line of no return in regards to their arrangement only being concerned with her getting pregnant. Progressing to a full blown affair and will be very interesting to see where it goes from here in regards to her marriage and becoming Jordan's baby mamba.
That last kinkily beautiful reveal of Devon and Sarah up to no good was intriguing compelling and hope it won't be long before we find out the truth behind it and Jordan makes Sarah into his lover and us cuckolding two for the price of one.
Super hot chapter. Looking forward to Jordan getting a piece of Sarah.
Chap2 was very sexy. I like where this is going with Sarah also.
Like the way this one goes better than the other. Please update!
Liked this better since we went straight to sex without all the gimmicky stuff. Hope for more of this. I would like to see Sarah get bred as well.
OOH, I like this one too!
Well, well that was certainly a brilliantly terrific and beautiful kinky wanton way to come up with an alternate take in this story. Pure stroke of genius to give Ellie a realistic reason as to why she would cheat on Devon with his brother: to have a family. As well as driving a wedge that will grow bigger between her and Devon as she continues to cheat and get massive pleasure from sleeping with her brother in law until she is knocked up and beyond. To enjoy and come to love doing it done much that she willingly cheats and has said affair.
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