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Reviews for His Heart

By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - jupisap on August 11, 2004
    nooo!!!! this story kicked ass!!! im soooo saddd right now~ ::sigh:: i guess it could b positive in a way too.. u can write more for ur other stories~ thats a plus.. but still.. u ended it!!!! how could u!! atleast the ending was fantastic!! i LOVED it!!! poor chris!! he had to kill his own father!! well, since u ended this story, please wreite more for present and puppet.. especially present!! i lthatthat story!!
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  • From ANON - a*v*a on August 11, 2004
    u ended it!!! damn!! iloved this story!! i understand though.. atleast now u can write more for ur other two stories which are both fnatastic!!! this story ended with a bang!! that was an awesome ending!! im sadd to see this story go, but happy since u will b able to write more for ur other stories and maybe even write a new one!!! cant wait!!
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  • From ANON - j.t on August 06, 2004
    u updated~ hurrayyy!! hahaha.. i kno, i sound gay.. but im so excited! that was wonderful! great! amazing! update soon!!!
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  • From ANON - kate j on August 06, 2004
    hey! this is an amzin story!! wow! i mean realli good!! im impressed! ur scenes are so detailed! im realli lookin forward to read more!
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  • From ANON - churio on August 06, 2004
    another chapter! yay! i realli realli enjoyed this chapter! nice work with the detail! it was great! waitin for ur update!!
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on August 06, 2004
    u updated!! yes!! finally!! all ur time was worth it! this chapter was amazin!! with all the problems on the site, im surpirsed u got to update! i hope u can update all htree stories verry soon@
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  • From ANON - janice on August 06, 2004
    loved it like always~ when r u gonna update ur other two stories?? i cant wait to read those! i guess il have to b patient.. but its jus so hard!! hehe
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  • From ANON - Ashlee on August 06, 2004
    yea, this site has been goin through some troubles.. im glad u updated though! the chapter was absolutely perfect! i hope this site keeps workin so u can post more!
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  • From ANON - jessie on August 03, 2004
    all are ur hits gone for all ur stories?? that totally sux!!! but this story is soo good so please write more!! k?? got it??
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  • From ANON - Eloise on July 30, 2004
    I just realized all my favourite charmed stories are by Grumpy Writer! I love this pairing. So please, please keep it up (especially His Heart).
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  • From ANON - brooke on July 28, 2004
    this chapter was great! nice and long!! just the way i like it!! r ur future chapters gonna b as long?? i hope so!! make ur sex scenes longer please!!! they're sooo good!!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on July 28, 2004
    hahaha.. they made a bet?? that was GREAT! good way to add the sex!! need i say it, but another amzing chapter~ no surprise there.. read ur ideas for future chapters.. and im lovin where u gona take this story!! and i would say more detail!! and do i see leo or prue makin an appearance in future chapters??? hmm..
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  • From ANON - chase j. on July 28, 2004
    sry, havent reviewed this story for a while! but i do read all of ur chapters and they are GREAT!!! im jus to lazy to review.. but ill start reviewing from now on.. give u some encouragement.. ahhaha
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  • From ANON - jupisap on July 28, 2004
    u updated this story!! this chapter was great!! this story jus gets betta and betta!! yea!! wat did happen to leo?? i totally forgot about him!! and i dunt remeber u mentionin prue... wel, the sex scene was hot!! ur the master! of scenes!! we want more!!
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  • From ANON - kendal on July 28, 2004
    like always, great chapter! it was long! yay!! ahh!! u made chris sound even hotter the way described him!! the sex scene, totally awesome!! i would say more detail!! but its up to u.. ur the great writer!! haha.. ill check bak in to see if u wrote ne more on any of ur stories soon!
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