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Reviews for His Heart

By : GrumpyWriter
  • From ANON - xfaytx on July 28, 2004
    ahhh!! stupid website!! did ne one else have trouble gettin on to it?? ne wayz, another eexcellent chapter!! it was oo long!! yess!! i got to read more! i hope all ur other chapters will be just as long!! i say ur sex scenes need MORE detail!
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  • From ANON - brooke on July 24, 2004
    i love chris/wyatt fics. but i havent been able to find ne decent ones until i found out about ur stories! u r a great writer and i enjoy all of ur stories, especially this one so i say 'write on!!!'
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  • From ANON - Kandy on July 24, 2004
    that was sweeetttt!!!! very hott!! i would have to say, one of ur best chapters.. verrrryy good!
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  • From ANON - ~*holly*~ on July 24, 2004
    ahh!! that was amazing!! i love ur styl of writinghis his is mai favorite story!!! playtime and puppet tie for second!! hahaha.. but "His Heart" is definately my favorite so far so please update this story as much as u can!! but dunt forget about ur other stories!!
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  • From ANON - ~churio~ on July 24, 2004
    that was realli realli good!! no, it was BRILLIANT! hahaha... ill b checkin in shortly to make sure u updated this story and im prayin u will!!! so update soon, for me???
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  • From ANON - SpRiNgEr on July 24, 2004
    u are the master of adult fiction!! no other way to put it.... u totally rock at writing sex scenes!! u are one kinky writer and i LOVE it! u make everythin 10 times more steamy!!! gotta hand it to u.. u totally ROCK~
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  • From ANON - ashlee on July 24, 2004
    ::applause:: that was some of your finest writing! so madd propz for u!!!! only thing left to say is "keep it comin'!!!!!"
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  • From ANON - janice on July 24, 2004
    if i had to rate this chapter from 1 to 10 (ten being the best), i would say i would give it a 12!!! yes it was that good!!!! verry kinky!! loving it loving it loving it!!!! i demand more!!! please!! :)
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  • From ANON - xfaytx on July 24, 2004
    omg!! that was awesome!! i mean unbelievably awesome!! damn darryl!! had to interrupt it!!! that cuffs were hott!!!!! so wyatts the kinky one eh??? haha.. not complainin cause im lovin it!!! nuttin more to say 'cept more please!!!!
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  • From ANON - dominique on July 24, 2004
    that was soooo good! omg~! i think that was mai favorite chapter!! i cant wait to read more... literally! so u hab to come back and write more asap because i cant wait ne longer!!
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  • From ANON - Eloise on July 23, 2004
    This is a great story. Please keep writing! I love the interplay between Chris and Wyatt. I want more!
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  • From ANON - jupisap on July 23, 2004
    cant wait to read more.. i liked the last few chapters.. so hopefully u'll write more!!
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  • From ANON - Chase J. on July 21, 2004
    this story kicks ass!!! u have to write more! awwoor oor chris!! damn the elders!! i love wyatt and chris together! read ur other story and it also rocks! so if ur thinkin about writin another story with chris and wyatt, i say GO FOR IT!!

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  • From ANON - kendal on July 21, 2004
    wow! u updated fast! not that im complainin!! that was an awwwesssommmeee chapter!! another sex scene with chris and wyatt, cant go wrong.. haha! write more!!!
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  • From ANON - kendal on July 20, 2004
    that was awesome~ keep writing and post more soon! dame goes for ur other story. "playtime"!!
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