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Reviews for Perihelion

By : darkangel1210
  • From ANON - vincent meoblinn on October 23, 2013
    Oh win! Go John go!
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on September 08, 2013
    Wow, thats all I can say WOW.Now I've read alot of fanfiction in my day , in fact for over a decade now, but THAT, that is just pure orgasmic awesomness. Just amazing. Better then porn anyday. I will never again be able to watch Benedict Cumberbatch without giggling like a 12 year old pubescent girl with a heart shaped diary.
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on July 04, 2013
    Mean! You are just sooooo mean! I hope you update VERY soon......
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on June 24, 2013
    These are the best written scenes of Dominance and submission that I have ever read in a fan fiction. You are putting the exact amount of emphasis that this is a power exchange and that it is the submissive's CHOICE to give over to their dominant. You also are giving fantastic demonstrations of the care that a dominant will give their sub after a scene. Very well done indeed.

    This story had me squirming in my seat. I cannot wait for more.
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  • From ANON - Arella20 on June 23, 2013
    Oh my gods...I love this story. It is just amasing I could vividly picture each scene. Keep up the writing you have great talent.
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  • From ANON - VincentMeoblinn on June 01, 2013
    Oh, well that was fantastic! I'm so glad to see you're still writing this.
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  • From ANON - Waruitenshi on April 14, 2013
    Ooooh! I can't wait for more! LOL! Okay, I CAN, but the waiting kills me! Slowly and nicely, but this story is just SO AWESOME!!!! X3 Any idea when the next chapter will be up?

    P.S. hope all goes well in your life and with your job (I read your author notes LoL).
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  • From ANON - Waruitenshi on April 14, 2013
    BEST SHERLOCK BDSM FIC EVER!!!!!! X3 I LOVED IT! You write so wonderfully! You've inspired me and made me want to read this over and over! LOL! I thought I loved the show before, but now. XD Wow! You really got the whole trusting part of the BDSM game very well written. Most people think its just violence and sex, but its so much more than that from the sources I've read from. :) Keep up the great work! I hope I can write awesomely like that!
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on April 07, 2013
    Oh what an amazing story!! love, love, love your writing style and the dynamic of these two. Its *so* what I was thinking while watching teh series. They are somehow made for the D/s dynamic play. I do think your Sherlock is a bit to considerate though. In the series he always comes off as a bit of a jerk and although I do see the need to make him a bit more considerate and more effusive in his praise it does annoy me a bit. Even if it is needed in this relationship and don't know if Sherlock would still be inclined to give it quite as much as he does in your story. For the rest though I love the content and hope for an update soon :)
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  • From glow-in-the-dark on March 30, 2013
    Oh wow is this good. You've managed to write the two in a very believable way. There's always an element of OOC in fanfics, it's a given, but the way you have written the interactions between Sherlock and Watson is almost believable. I'm going to go watch the show now and just imagine all the posibilities that could happen lmao. I like the speed of things so far. You've made them move quickly, yet unbelievably slow at the same time. I can't wait for the actual sex to ensue yet want you to draw it out for as ling as you can at the same time lol. And oh god. At the start, when watching Eric and Will, Sherlock going for John's pulse point was beyond perfect. He could have just looked at Watson and been able to see the distress he was under and how the scene before him was affecting him, but he goes and gets solid proof of it and I fucking live how John let him feel his racing pulse. Was beyond delicious.
    Nothing but praise from me at the moment. Just the warning of not letting ole John get too OOC and fall into the role a sub who acts submissive 24/7. The way you had him reacting and responding right now is a perfect balance, so just watch that you dot write him as a mega uke lol.
    Waiting for the next chapter and praying the muses are kind to you!!!! Xoxoxo
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  • From ANON - ScarletteValentine on March 21, 2013
    So, I'm going to start by telling you that I very rarely review stories at all anywhere, much less here. However, I had to review to yours. The dynamics and power play between them.... were amazing. I loved every minute of what I've read and I hope to read more soon. This was so good I was taking more bathroom breaks than I should have at work just so that I could read this on my phone. The way you've written this, it makes me wonder if you've experienced the lifestyle before. I love the way you bring the characters to light, and I love the way you make them interact. It's such a beautifully written fic. It's hard to capture my attention so well that I refuse to quit reading until I've read all I can, but your story made me want to do so. I can not wait to read more of this and I truly hope it doesn't take too long between posting your chapters. I really REALLY can see this being in canon just implied in the show. You've done a really great job.
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  • From VincentMeoblinn on February 25, 2013
    You can't see it, but I'm on my knees, head lowered, hands behind my back, patiently waiting for more.
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  • From KotoriSensei on February 13, 2013
    Holy mother of God! Thats was...wait...i shouldn't be using Her name in this...jijijiji
    Incredible, sexy, sensual, hot, amazing, and all the adjetives you like...good ones of course. This was so good.
    Sherlock is perfect in his Dom character; he was born for that, just as Jhon for his, and you are a genious for figure it out!
    So...next chapter?
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  • From KotoriSensei on February 13, 2013
    So, last night i had to sleep at some point...jijiji
    Today, i have to work but i got the time to read this chapter (part 5), and...>///
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  • From KotoriSensei on February 12, 2013
    Holy shi**! Call the 911! I'm on FIRE!!!! XD
    That was A-M-A-Z-I-N-G! And beautifull. You wrote Jhon as a perfect Sub. Sherlock must be happy... ;)

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