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  • From KotoriSensei on February 12, 2013
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  • From KotoriSensei on February 12, 2013
    second chapter: great.
    Poor Jhon, trying to denie what he feels. Of course is totally understandable, because "he is straigh", and this is Sherlock we are talking about; anything with him, including a relationship will be hard, and a BDSM relationship?
    O-O'''
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  • From KotoriSensei on February 12, 2013
    Wow, and i mean WOW (with background sound of drums!)
    This was one of a hell chapter, and is just the first one! Incredible.
    Can't wait to read the next ones. Sherlock and Jhon are perfect as Dom and Sub, i mean, their personalities mach perfectly, because Sherlock is sherlock, and Jhon follows him everywere, and do everything he says, but at the same time has the character to say NO when is necesary, something incredible important in a Sub.

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2013
    Dear God. Its inhumane, what you're doing. The intensity, the tension between Sherlock and John is almost tangible, and yet you insist on tormenting me with slow updates. Inexcusable! Jobs aren't as important as smut!
    obviously I'm kidding. But excellent update. I was serious about the intensity level between the two, that's magic, to make us feel it through words the way you do.
    And good chapter edit, by the way, I started the story over from the beginning just now and it flows perfectly.
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  • From VincentMeoblinn on February 10, 2013
    Fantastic! Loving the scenes!
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  • From ANON - blisblop on February 08, 2013
    Thank you for the very sane and sensual take on BDSM.Hardly anyone addresses the utter importance of aftercare and bringing the sub down from the scene, this forms bonds and shows a son's talents and commitment almost more so then the scene, this is where you can see if this is just a power tripping abuser not a partner nor even a playmate one can trust.Yes, very well done.
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  • From Tsu-chan79 on February 03, 2013
    Wow!! You are an amazing writer! I'm fairly new to the world of "Sherlock" but I've fallen in love with the series. You've written both Sherlock and John so entertaining and yet perfectly in-character. The sensual tension you've written, the way John discovers his desire of Sherlock (who is the PERFECT Dom!), the way you allow the scenes to unfold with no rush, you are a very talented writer. Thank you for sharing this with the fandom! I must now go look up your other writings. Keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on January 21, 2013
    Interesting. Very interesting! Looking forward to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2013
    Dear God. John makes such a good sub. Well, really they make good pair. Sherlock is equally talented. But, I do feel like you've lost some of the Voice you usually have with Sherlock. I would suggest rewatching a new episode before your next chapter. Everything else is marvelous.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 23, 2012
    I feel like you updated this chapter just for me. Again, perfection. Loved it. I feel like Sherlock could be crueler, but I know he's working up to that. Do not give up on this story. I need it like a need air, and you wouldn't deprive me of air, would you?
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 20, 2012
    I've read your other stories, and I enjoyed them. But this, this is inspired! I really mean it, its marvelous. The way you captured the dom & sub relationship is without ignorance, which I love because its a popular take people like to write without doing their research. Not the case here. Well, I hope you continue it because its amazing. Well done, you!
    Go fast though, I simply hate waiting.
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  • From CodyMThomas on December 17, 2012
    considering the mentality behind everything is my favorite part about BDSM I am definitely seeing some strong potential for this story. I will definitely be checking back on it. It's a good strong start and I am looking forward to more. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Silver on December 16, 2012
    Wow


    write more please
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  • From ANON - Zodia on December 14, 2012
    Wow, I didn't even realize how much I wanted this until I read it. Please continue your magic dear author, I'm at your mercy.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 13, 2012
    Ohhh this is going to get good! I hope in the next chapter.
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