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Reviews for His Heart

By : GrumpyWriter
  • From Shadow12300 on June 14, 2008
    r u gonna do a sequel?
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  • From on August 21, 2006
    intersting chapter,
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  • From on August 19, 2006
    nice to see Daryll making an appeareance. Wyatt is spoiling chris.
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  • From on August 19, 2006
    okay so this is the changed future, wonder what happened to Leo and the other, lets hope that Future Chris didn die in vein
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  • From on August 19, 2006
    lol, this was unexpected, the elders blocked him from entereing the heavens, wel they must be pissed off and wonder what Chris is going to go through
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  • From on August 19, 2006
    now i can see the issues of Leo and Chris, lol, that was unexpected, and i don't want to be a "annoying one" but you seem to have bits of words missing from here and there or three words mashed into one. well anyways, let see what happens next.
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  • From on August 19, 2006
    hm, when i read the part, BEEP, BEEP, i thought Wyatt was swearing as he neared his climax, but than the Beep turned out to be an alarm clock, Dumb me, lol. and when some one says THE END in the end, it usually means its the END, lol, i m not ,making any sense.
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  • From ANON - Good W itch on September 16, 2005
    I just found this story and while reading it, I noticed there was a chapter missing. It went from ch.4 to ch.6...Chris tried to escape up there then he's snuggling in bed. Thought you'd like to know. Otherwise, great story!!
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  • From ANON - Amy on August 24, 2005
    Good read

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  • From ANON - churio on August 11, 2004
    i thought that was a perfect time to end this story, and u did an excellent job with the last chapter.. ill b readin ur other stories!!
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  • From ANON - Kendal on August 11, 2004
    ahh!!! u ended it!! noooo~~!!! this was mai favorite fic!!! i loved it!! nooo!!! this whole fic was great and will b greatly missed... the last chapter was the best!! i loved the ending to this story.. but im still sad that it ended... i hope u write another story soon.. and PLEASE dont end ur other stories!
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  • From ANON - ashlee on August 11, 2004
    aww~ its over? that was such a sad/sweet ending.. sad becfause chris had to kill leo, but sweet because of the wyatt/chris moment.. i loved this fic.. im realli realli realli sad to see it over.. but the endin was so good.. it was a good place to end this story.. but still, it was such a great fic!! i hope u start writin more for ur pther two since u finished this one.. keep the other two goin for a loong time though~!
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  • From ANON - Janice on August 11, 2004
    that was a wonderful ending to an incredible story~ im not too sad that this story is over becuase u still have two fantastic fics out there and i kno u'll probably write more~ this was an incredible story and ill prob. read it again soon becasue it was so good~ hahaha..
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  • From ANON - brooke on August 11, 2004
    wow!! that was one hell of an endin~ aww... poor chris.. i cant blieve leo tried to kill his own son!!! it was sad that chris had to kill his own father~ this story will b hard to let go.. but im sure u'll write more stories so ill b lookin for them~
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  • From ANON - KaNdY on August 11, 2004
    its over!!! y????!?!?!?! this story was the best!!!!! well, all ur stories are the best.. but still!!! this story was sooo good!! to make up fndinndin this story, i hope u write tons more for present and playtime!! k?? im not too upset about this story endin though because the endin was fabulous!! hehe~
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