Leveling the Score | By : shikiblade Category: M through R > NCIS Views: 10355 -:- Recommendations : 0 -:- Currently Reading : 0 |
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A/N: After going over my few reviews (thanks guys) I had to stop and contemplate what I was writing in reflection to the reality of the situation. So I hope this chapter blows your mind a little in comparison to what you were thinking would happen. It is just a slight detour to what I am planning, but also a time-filler. After all, it is twenty four hours story time, not a one nighter. Hope you enjoy, and a review or two to let me know what you think of the stories progress would be great, because I really want to make this work from start to finish.
Chapter Seven: Unpredictable Succumbing to what was inevitably his situation; Tony chose to be in the hard place rather than on the preverbal rock without a movie in the world. Tim led him into the bedroom where he found it was a lot neater than his previous glances at it. No clothing on the floor, no piles of books in odd corners; it was all overly clean. “You didn’t get this place dolled up for me did you McGee?” Tony asked. “Fifty fifty,” Tim answered with a shrug, removing the jumper he had been wearing. Tony removed his own jumper and shoes, watching Tim do the same. Tony had been home and gotten changed, so he was wearing a pair of jeans and a shirt while Tim wore track pants and a sports shirt. Tony sat on one edge of the bed, still feeling shy. “Is this what you want of me, as your willing slave for twenty four hours?” Tony asked for the last time, while still looking away. Tim crawled over the bed to sit behind Tony and rub his shoulders. “Yes,” Tim said with a bit of twisted pleasure in his voice. Tony turned and looked at him, and Tim leaned in and kissed him. One arm wrapped around Tony’s waist while another rubbed the back of his head. Tony just left his hands in his lap while Tim held him and kissed him. It still felt good to be kissing, even if it was a little rougher than a woman. But still, a part of him was melting, his human compassion for his friend, despite the lowering of boundaries, was making him want to enjoy this. Tim adjusted his position a little so he could pull Tony into his arms, and Tony took the hint and put his arms loosely around Tim. He could only guess at what to do with a guy, and all the things he wouldn’t normally do. He decided to let Tim do what he wanted for a moment and follow suit when appropriate. Tim slowly lowered Tony so he was lying on his back, Tim on top of him. Tim continued to kiss Tony, and he enjoyed every moment of it. He moved one hand slowly down Tony’s side, searching for the end of his shirt. Finding it, he slowly slipped his hand up Tony’s abdomen and across his solar plexus. Rolling onto his side and pulling Tony with him, Tim could feel around properly, his fingers running through the chest hair he found. Tony let out the slightest of moans as Tim continued to search. Slowly but surely, Tim removed Tony’s shirt, breaking the kiss long enough to let the shirt pass. But in a surprise move, Tony was the one to kiss first. Tim was surprised but didn’t let it show. Tony wasn’t doing much more than holding Tim for the moment but he let Tim explore his firm chest with his hands. Tim leaned back for a moment as he removed his own shirt, exposing his hairless torso and firm body. Tony, in an attempt to make this work, ran a hand slowly over Tim’s chest, feeling the skin and muscle there. “You do have soft skin Tim. It goes with your feminine glow,” Tony said with a smile. Tim laughed and then mounted Tony, straddling his legs across Tony’s hips and resting there. While he was sure Tony wasn’t fully erect, there was certainly some pressure there. Leaning forward, he kissed Tony on the lips briefly, before moving his attention to Tony’s neck, kissing and feeling around for the sensitive point there. Sure enough, he found it quickly as Tony convulsed lightly under his body. Licking the spot again, Tony moaned as the nerves down his back jolted in reaction. Tim started to slowly kiss his way down Tony, finding sensitive points around his collar bone and neck, each one making Tony almost leap out of bed with pleasure and surprise. Tim moved lower still and with a very light tongue, licked Tony’s nipple, which had the same effect. “How’s that?” Tim whispered. “Oh God,” Tony whispered in return. Tim did it again and again before wrapping his lips around the nipple and licking harder. Tony continued to moan, not able to hold back his enjoyment of the feelings. His confusion in the situation, once a loud and screaming voice, was almost faded to a nothing. Tim moved to the other nipple, and the anticipation of it was almost too much. The instant Tim’s tongue touched home, Tony moaned again. Repeating the process, Tim did his best to get Tony sucked into the moment. Chest hair didn’t bother him as he continued to give pleasure to Tony. He could feel his cock wanting go get out, but his urges were to touch Tony and to make him enjoy this. He started kissing his way down Tony’s sternum, before moving down to his stomach. Passing his navel, his hands moved into place and undid Tony’s belt. Before he could work out what was happening, Tony discovered that Tim had found a way into his pants, lowering them slowly to expose his underwear. He had worn his boxer-briefs as always, and hoped they were what Tim would like. Coming back to reality on the situation, he sighed as he let Tim remove his pants. Tim’s mouth returned to his nipples, taking him away again into a world of sexual arousal and surprise. Tim moved down Tony’s body, coming to the edge of Tony’s underwear. He ran a hand over Tony’s dick, feeling its half erection. He rubbed it lightly, his fingers caressing the end gently and tickling him. Sure enough, he could tell he was getting the desired response as he felt Tony get harder. Running his tongue over the end through the underwear, Tony let out what was obviously a restrained moan. Doing it again and again, he was sure Tony was fully erect. Tim started to slowly lower Tony’s underwear, seeing the light tufts of pubic hair. Tony obviously shaved his down to keep it from going mad, but enough to have some there. And then came out a large dick. Cut and slowly letting out precum, Tim exposed the last of Tony. He put his hands on Tony and started to rub his erection, then, before Tony could start thinking too much, Tim opened his mouth and took in Tony’s cock. His tongue and lips ran over it, getting it as wet as possible. Tony was sighing at the feeling as Tim worked back and forth, sucking Tony off. Every so often he stopped and flicked his tongue quickly and delicately over Tony’s cock. “Don’t stop,” came Tony’s whispered voice. “Just wait,” Tim muttered as he licked down the shaft of Tony’s dick and then onto his balls. With long and hard licks, Tim got Tony wet and just as turned on. But Tony was moaning even louder as Tim sucked on one of Tony’s nuts and licked it while it was in his mouth. A louder moan followed as Tim did it to his other nut. Moving back and forth, Tony was almost on the verge of yelling with pleasure. “I need to get off,” Tony moaned, almost begging. “Then fuck my mouth,” Tim said. “What?” Tony asked, stunned. “Do it, I want you to,” Tim said, before he put Tony’s dick in his mouth and giving it a deep throating. Tony, thinking little else of it, held the back of Tim’s head and started thrusting. The sounds of his cock moving in and out of Tim’s mouth were the same as that of the girls he had done this to. He could make his own pleasure, as only he knew better than anyone else how to get off. He loved the feeling and he let go of Tim’s head as he continued thrusting. Tim was moaning on him, and even that was sending vibrations down his dick. “Oh yeah, that’s it,” Tony sighed as he continued to fuck Tim’s face hard. Wanting to reach the absolute of pleasure before things turned, Tony thrust his cock right in down to the shaft. Tim coughed and gagged as Tony withdrew and did it again. Finally, Tony withdrew and Tim gave a few quick licks to Tony’s dick before coming up to kiss him. Tony withdrew slightly. “I don’t want to taste my dick on your mouth,” Tony objected. “Bet you wouldn’t say that if I was a girl,” Tim said with a coy smile. “True,” Tony answered and let Tim kiss him, before rolling him on top. Tony mentally sighed as he knew what was expected of him. He kissed Tim one last time and then slowly kissed down his neck, He didn’t try to get any of Tim’s sensitive points, not knowing where to look. But as he got to Tim’s chest, he did move to his nipples. As he licked and sucked on Tim’s nipples, he decided to cover two bases and started to undo McGee’s tracksuit pants. He lowered them as he continued sucking on Tim’s nipples and doing his best to make Tim moan. He tried to be sensitive in his movements, but Tim’s lack of moaning suggested that he wasn’t doing as well. But there was a gentle hand on his head that suggested he was doing alright. He moved to the other nipple and started there. Tim let out a soft sigh as Tony worked his tongue back and forth. Deciding he had better get on with what had to be done, Tony slowly kissed down Tim’s body, stopping at points that made Tim twinge and licked them again to give him a light spasm. As he got to the edge of Tim’s underwear, he paused to note that Tim was wearing briefs. “Not in the mood for boxers today?” Tony asked. “I wore them because I like the feel of them outside of work. Don’t ask, it is just a comfort thing,” Tim replied as his hand rubbed Tony’s hair lightly. Tony slowly, but surely, ran his hand over Tim’s dick. It felt hard and about as hard as he was, if not harder. Slowly he lowered Tim’s underwear. Like him, Tim had trimmed down his pubic hair, but it was lighter than his own. But still it was brown and surrounded a hard dick. It wasn’t as long as his own, but it certainly seemed thicker. With one last thought of what he was getting into, he finished lowering Tim’s underwear to expose everything. He took Tim’s dick into his hand jerked it a little, trying to do it correctly. Tim was circumcised as well, and he hoped that the rumours of circumcised men being more hygienic than not were true as he opened his mouth and took in Tim’s dick. He moved his mouth up and down over his dick and took in the sensations. It was a weird taste, but not disgusting. It was a lot different to being with girls, as his jaw started to hurt after a while. He let up and did some tongue flicking over Tim’s knob, hoping he did it as well as Tim did. He then decided that there was another way to give Tim some pleasure. He lowered himself to Tim’s nuts, and with a hard swallow, started licking away at them. The feeling was weird and the taste was extremely salty, but still he worked at it. He then sucked in one of Tim’s balls and licked on it while it was in his mouth. Tim moaned to that and his hips thrusted a little. Tony went to Tim’s other nut and did the same. Tim moaned again in pleasure as the sensation went rippling through his body. Tim did this a few more times before he returned to sucking Tim off. “Time to return the favour,” Tim said. Tony stopped what he was doing. “You mean...?” “I won’t be deep-throating you because I don’t want you to be sick all over me, but you’ll take a few inches,” Tim explained briefly. Tony sighed and didn’t say anything as he sucked on Tim’s dick a little before a hand lightly held his head in place and the thrusting began. It was not as pleasant as it seemed. He made a mental note of that for next time. If he had to deep throat he would have been sore and gagging. But this small amount of dick moving in and out of its own accord was just enough to give Tim pleasure without being suffocated. When his jaw was getting too sore to keep going, he pulled away and lightly kissed Tim on a spot beside his navel before coming up to him to get kissed. “Time to step up the fun,” Tim said. Tony cringed. “But there is a little surprise in it for you too.” Tim leaned over to a draw and took out a packet of condoms and lubricant. He took a condom and ripped the cover off it. But instead of putting it on himself, he leaned over Tony and put it on him. “Are you serious McGee?” Tony asked. “Tony, I want to bond with you, and I can’t do that by dominating you all the way. I am as versatile as you suggested I should be.” Tim then took some lubricant and applied it to himself. Tony, not sure what position they were going into, just sat there watching. “Put a pillow behind you and sit up,” Tim instructed. Tony did so, knowing the position from doing it with girls. As he sat there, still as erect as ever, Tim positioned himself and slowly lowered himself onto Tony’s hard dick. Slowly, Tony felt Tim’s arse engulfing his dick until it was all the way in and Tim was moaning with pleasure. Wrapping his legs around Tony, Tim started to ride Tony, before pulling him in and kissing and hugging him. Tony had little else to do but enjoy the sensation and kiss Tim back. His few experiences in anal had been pleasurable, so this wasn’t anything new. Tim, feeling Tony inside him and his dick rubbing against his sensitive points, felt more love and closeness for his friend. He wanted to do almost anything for Tony while he was feeling this. A whirlwind of extreme feeling and closeness always made him give in his wants to the man or woman he was loving. “Tim,” Tony whispered for no apparent reason. “Tony,” Tim answered back between hard breathing and kissing. Tim grabbed Tony by the shoulders and, more skilfully than Tony could imagine, rolled them over so Tony was now on top of him. Tony took the hint and started thrusting into him. This was a new experience, being on top of a guy who he wasn’t arresting or bullying or training with. Tony let his feelings go and simply enjoyed the sensation. He was having some loving sex and that is all there was to it. “Thrust hard Tony,” Tim begged in a passionate state. “Like this?” Tony asked, pushing in as hard as he could. Tim moaned loudly, and Tony did it again. It was a pleasurable feeling for both of them. Soon, Tony returned to his general thrusting. But as he felt his orgasm building, Tony thought he’d better see if Tim had any other plans. “I’m gonna cum McGee,” he moaned. “Do it, fill me,” Tim gasped as he started jerking off. Tony, not wishing to delay his pleasure, started thrusting away, creating a major feeling of uncontrollable need in his cock. Finally, he couldn’t hold on. “Oh God, Tim, oh,” he cried as he lost all control, his pelvis thumping hard against Tim’s arse as he ejaculated. Both men were moaning in pleasure before Tony collapsed onto Tim, breathing heavily. Tony felt that Tim was till jerking off. “Come on Timmy, finish it,” Tony encouraged as he withdrew. He carefully took off the condom and looked for somewhere to put it. “Bottom draw,” Tim muttered as he looked over Tony’s body. He was getting close. As Tony returned, Tim looked at him. “I’m going to cum on your face,” Tim said. Tony, clearly not as impressed, lowered himself down to Tim’s dick and waited, eyes tightly shut. Tim felt his orgasm building as it had been since Tony had his orgasm. Finally, it was too close to control. “Here we go,” Tim moaned loudly and he shot a large round of cum onto Tony’s face. Breathing heavily, he sat up and looked at Tony’s face. This is what he wanted to remember, just for the next time Tony had a go at him, teasing or not. 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